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Post by Ebless Egil on Jun 17, 2006 5:03:42 GMT
Where new Jedi come to train to further them selves in The Ways Of The Force
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Post by Lynn Gali on Jun 20, 2006 20:14:25 GMT
Lynn Gali entered the training room. She was expecting her Padawan at any moment. As his training neared completion, she was reluctant to finish. He had been a good friend and bright pupil, but now more than ever the Order needed Knights of his skill.
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Post by Bobby Drake on Jun 22, 2006 9:17:56 GMT
hello im just a young padwan looking for his mastere all un armed and stuped
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Post by Lynn Gali on Jun 22, 2006 9:18:51 GMT
((First of all, what the hell? Secondly was that ooc? Thirdly, what the hell?))
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Post by Bobby Drake on Jun 22, 2006 9:20:40 GMT
i was being funny actinig lost
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Post by Lynn Gali on Jun 22, 2006 9:24:43 GMT
((ok.... good idea  now... for ooc: use parenthesies(....), for speech "...", for actions *....* ok got it? let me demonstrate.)) *Lynn Gali saw her young Padawan enter. Smiling gently, she stoo d to greet him.* "Ah, Bobby Drake. I have been expecting you. Are you ready to learn the ways of the Force?"((The color and italics aren't necessary, just my style.)) |
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Post by Bobby Drake on Jun 22, 2006 9:26:42 GMT
ok lets get started then master gali i have been wating for this day since we first met i pull out my light saber and light it
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Post by Lynn Gali on Jun 22, 2006 9:30:45 GMT
(( *slaps for head*What is so hard about distinguishing speech from action?))
*Lynn Gali produces her own light saber. With push of the button it hisses to life, illuminating Master Gali's blue skin in its blue glow.*
" Are you sure of this young one? I'll not go easy on you."
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Post by Bobby Drake on Jun 22, 2006 9:33:59 GMT
bobby drake stands strat up to rise from his stanc and say
yes master for the fact is that even if i wer not you need me to be so i am
then he retakes his stanc
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Post by Lynn Gali on Jun 22, 2006 9:35:45 GMT
((Better, but use the marks.))
*Wasting no more words, Lynn swings her saber from left to right*
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Post by Bobby Drake on Jun 22, 2006 9:40:03 GMT
(( bobby takes a dfens for still he cant brening him self to hit his master the one who gave him so much though traning))
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Post by Lynn Gali on Jun 22, 2006 9:43:02 GMT
((ooh so close... but those are for out of character statements such as this. use *..* for actions. Also, elaborate more as to how you avoid the slash.))
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Post by Bobby Drake on Jun 22, 2006 9:51:46 GMT
((bobby attmps to dog his master slash by using the force to jump over her ))
and he still cant bring himsleff to hit her
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Post by Lynn Gali on Jun 22, 2006 9:54:45 GMT
((Again, ((...)) indicates ooc usually. Jump succeeds.))
Lynn smiles at her pupils skill,but quickly whirls around into a slash aimed at Bobby's back.
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Post by Bobby Drake on Jun 22, 2006 9:59:52 GMT
((ok i think i got it )) **booby atmp to jum away from his master and put some distenc between them**
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now... for ooc: use parenthesies(....), for speech "...", for actions *....* ok got it? let me demonstrate.))